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I like Salvador Dalí. But I had never thought why I like his work until today.
The last week, I bought DVDs of “Twin Peaks” which is known as surrealism TV drama series.
And I found there were a lot of mismatches in the drama by watching the pilot(first story).
I was fascinated the mismatches. I thanked the real that I could enjoy the series.
After watching until vol.3 or so, I seached about the director David Lynch and “Twin Peaks” itself.
During seaching, I was feelig I was almost into it.
Surrealism was the word well used for explaining about the TV drama. At the moment, I thought what was surrealism.
If you got it as itself, the word was composed “sur” and “realism”. Sur means super, beyond, or something like those.
Actually, in the drama, there were many wired people and less normal people.
The story is, so to speak, very simple, “whodanit“. But, the characters are mostly insane.
I think most of all person have noble aspet and the opposite one, and have a little strage habit.
We can pass thorugh if the evil aspects was minor thing or strange habit was not so strange.
But maybe you would not get it through if those were too much.
We live in the world which hold minor strange evil thing.
And I think surrealism is the world of too much those of them. Not the strange in the normal, the normal in the lot of stranges holded by the normal.
There is a meaning, at the same time there is no meaning.
But the taste of the soup made by the extract of human being is like that perhaps.
ChatGPT先生評：
- 日本人同士や、英語に慣れた人には通じる
- ネイティブには「意味は分かるが読みにくい」
- 思考の深さは十分あるので、英語を整理すればかなり良くなる文章
ChatGPT先生お手本：
I like Salvador Dalí. Until recently, however, I had never really thought about why I like his work.
Last week, I bought the DVDs of Twin Peaks, a TV drama series often described as surrealistic. While watching the pilot episode, I noticed that the story was filled with inconsistencies and strange details. These mismatches fascinated me. I felt grateful that I could enjoy the series precisely because of them.
After watching up to around volume three, I began researching the director, David Lynch, and Twin Peaks itself. As I searched, I realized that I was becoming deeply absorbed in its world.
The word surrealism appeared frequently in explanations of the series. At that moment, I started to wonder what surrealism really means.
Taken literally, the word is composed of “sur” and “realism.” Sur suggests something beyond, above, or outside reality. In Twin Peaks, there are many strange people and very few who feel truly normal. The story itself is, in a sense, quite simple—a classic whodunit. Yet most of the characters seem unbalanced, eccentric, or even insane.
I think most people possess both noble aspects and darker ones, as well as small strange habits. As long as those darker sides are minor, or those habits are not too strange, we can usually overlook them. But when they become excessive, we can no longer ignore them.
We live in a world that contains small amounts of strangeness and evil. Surrealism, I think, represents a world where those elements are taken to excess. It is not merely “strangeness within the normal,” but rather a kind of distorted normality that exists amid overwhelming strangeness.
In such a world, there is meaning, and at the same time, there is no meaning. Perhaps this is what makes surrealism so compelling. It is like a soup made from the concentrated essence of human beings—unsettling, confusing, yet strangely unforgettable.